Angel of Death

Hows it been, BBB? I am so glad I read this today! This was another fine installment to the Seance series. I just loved the twist at the end. I ...

Hello Again!! My, this installment was even better than the first. I could almost taste the carnival and the smells and the screams of the people. The way you described ...

Hey Kylan!!! I'm so sorry that I didn't read this earlier but I've been really busy...but I'm here now! I loved this, as always Kylan. You wrap everything that you're ...

I'm back!! Hah I love Zoe and the word lapslut. She just brings a whole different meaning to this world. You detailed every single move that Shuqaio and Zoe did ...

Whoa that must've been a really weird dream...well at least you could see Edward. Usually when I had dreams of Twilight, he was always walking away.

Hello Sam, As I mentioned to someone before, I'm on the random member critiquing bandwagon so I might be dropping in and out every once and a while. On with ...

I'm on the random member bandwagon this week, so don't be surprised if I critique something else of yours in the next couple of days. So hey Via! Well I ...

Hey Alice, haven't read anything from you in a while Well anyways, I thought this was great but it needs a little more polishing. Expand it, explore Heather and Jess's ...

As long as you translate the language into English and put it somewhere at the end of your piece, I don't see the problem in using a large quantity of ...

Well Flem that was a bit scary and funny at the same time. You know that little nervous laugh that you make when you don't know whether to through up ...

tnme22: I am so sorry for the confusions. This was written on a whim because the contest that I entered...well I thought that the deadline was today. It was a ...

Note: I haven't written Romantic Fiction on this site in a while but its always been my passion because well it was the only thing I wrote on this site ...

Wow, this is an amazing picture. The title that you picked for this fits it in that fantasy-esque way but really the photo is so simple that its beautiful. I ...

Hello, well I took a look at the other version of this poem and I thought that it needed more. Since it was locked I came to read this one ...

Hello, I liked this installment! Your character, Aaron, is hard not to love because of his way with words and emotions. Really, I don't understand why Hera would want to ...